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Spike Hooked in Deep  

MelbLife 57M
287 posts
2/9/2022 10:55 pm
Spike Hooked in Deep


Spike Hooked in Deep
The spike hooked in deep
A dream rising from river of sleep
The beginning in your thought
The beginning in your talk
The beginning in your glance
The beginning in taking a chance
Holding the hand of a stranger
Wandering vulnerability the danger
In visiting new places gaining a new perspective
Escaping the tracks on which you were expected
Pink lips becoming warmer till red hot
In tumbling rapture of kisses never wish to stop
Exploring the interest and brightness of you
Learning all those thing I always thought I knew
Taking another step and finding self in flight
As the morning together turns into another night
Discuss and explain and sitting either side of the table
Telling stories and retelling our own fables
Until we meet together in the middle
See if in this kiss can find the answer to the riddle
Of who you are and where we will start and end
Discovering in this heat you are more than friend
Strip in sensual strokes the commonsense from our skin
As the passion ignited and desire wins
Close our selves from the world and pivot
On axis of our loving as caresses attention rivet
Slipping under these clothes we wear
As these passion moments eager share
Buttons popped and clips tugged free
Getting hurriedly naked you and me
For you are the dream rising from my sleep
And this spike of love hooked in deep.



MelbLife 57M
313 posts
2/13/2022 6:20 am

Jules, thank you for your response, and observation....in all honestly the pace, the rhythm tends to build in my thoughts as the words escape, so it is a case of capturing the rhythm, the metre, the flow and its speed, in the sentences which land on the empty screen.....glad to know I managed to gauge the right tempo here .


Jules1590 54F  
8151 posts
2/12/2022 5:33 am

Well done!
Enjoy the unfolding and discovery of a new relationship and where it will go. The fast paced rhythm of the prose parallels wonderfully with the excitement of meeting someone new. Very nice.


MelbLife 57M
313 posts
2/10/2022 9:15 pm

author51, between us both and nothing between,
the Sun would hide its blushing face to see such fun,
of you and me and nothing between together hun


author51 59F  
130010 posts
2/9/2022 11:45 pm

In my dreams this is how it would be between you and me..xoxo


MelbLife 57M
313 posts
2/9/2022 10:59 pm

from beginning see, more than you see in yourself, the words you speak of where you have been, what you have seen, when and where you made your stand, and how you reached for your plan, the good times and the bad, the tales telling me, who you are, and how I want to be, the one who ends the story alongside you.

.....or so the story usually flows....


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